Not had chance to play it yet on my trombone, but I like the tune and want to play it with a quartet. Thank you! But much more typographic control is needed: the music type-setting software positions accent marks, the few dynamics actually supplied and text markings (e.g. the word "Trio") too high above the staves or in the middle of them, or over the top of notes. There are several places where this makes the music difficult to see when one is sight-reading. More space between the staves might help by giving you more places to put those extra markings, but you would still need to tell the music program where to put the markings and the music would be bound to spread over more pages.
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