Amazing and also this is for Dr. Scott Cairns i am an aspiring musician/composer and I dont know alot of music theory I was wondering if you could teach me via e-mail if you could that would be great my e-mail is qwin_white@yahoo.com thank you in advance
Your work is very good. I would suggest exploring other keys in the peice- use Secondary Dominants to get there and back. The foray into the minor key at the end ofthe peice was too short and needs development. Ending with a Picardy 3rd was a little too cliched. The final measures signal an abrupt end- expand on the final measures. Try the parallel major to the relative minor. This will add a lot more color to your work. While in the minor key one must use Neopolitan 2nds and German aug. 6ths to add color and beauty.
