Your arrangement is in A major and therefore should omit the D# in the key signature. Other than the wrong notes resulting from this wrong key signature, it is good! There is one place impossible to sustain the low long notes in the right hand while playing the upper line. Maybe a piano pedal would work, but on a harpsichord or organ it is impossible.
Thank you! This is in A so one sharp is superfluous. Also there are several mistakes on first page. They are obvious so this sheet is useful. However you should be aware of them.
it is impossible.