Thank you omicronrg9 for this comment, indeed I corrected the score by hand because I use a "Mozart" program to edit my scores and it is very limited for writing the piano...
I like to use clusters and minor seconds...
But it is true that I am absolutely not a pianist because I have never really worked on this instrument nor of course taken lessons...
I'm more of a flutist...
For me, a score is a working basis for the performer, it's up to him to find what expression to give to the work, a bit like when you have a baroque manuscript in front of you without a lot of indications...I I would like one day to hear proposals different from mine by other musicians...
Hi! This is a curious piece. It seems you modified the score by hand, didn't you?
What notation software have you used?
The f^4 cluster & other parts of the piece with those extreme fortississimo dynamics seem to be saturating the mic sadly, but you probably noticed this already. The contrast is shocking at first and and the slow parts are beautiful.
Apart from that, in your interpretation you do some ritardandos that don't appear in the score, are they always intended? If that's the case, consider my suggestion of adding them to the score.
Kind regards!
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