Belle esthétique ici. Dans l'emsemble, la pièce se tient. Il ne faut pas ici comparer cette pièce avec quoi que ce soit. Il faut la prendre telle quelle. Je crois que la liberté est une partie importante de l'art. Faire ce qu'on a à faire, tout simplement. Bravo!
I usually like your songs for reminding me of my own beginning in composition. But this is too much. I will never treat such things as music. They are notes being placed everywhere for no apparent reason. And I do not see any twelve-tone technique or anything. I'm sorry to say that, because perhaps you like to "write" such things, but many people will think they are not worth hearing. And so do I... That being said, I think that overall, you have great talent. Hope I haven't been too crude... Have a good day! Samuel Labrecque
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